Dead of Winter

By Aunty Depressant

The chill down my spine trickles
etching my back where your breath,
once warm and soft would caress my soul

empty sighs fill the chamber of my heart
once alive
a summer friend
turned
leaves


blown back together

We shared the fall
into each others arms
deeper and deeper
flesh and desire
something deeper

So soft, like sunbeams
dancing orange of the peaks
blazing
embedding
down

trapped
drifts
high as a high man
like desert sands
that steal all warmth

Crying for a time
that is as dead as the flowers
frozen
feeding the omnivorous insects

The flowers may return
but you are always dead in winter


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© 2007 Aunty Depressant
Published on Friday, November 30, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • IAmNorge On Sunday, April 5, 2009, IAmNorge (39)By person wrote:

    Such imagery and relation to winter and cold to something so much deeper, tantalizing the way this flows together, good write

  • LadyMalice On Saturday, December 8, 2007, LadyMalice (18)By person wrote:

    This is beautiful. =)

  • A former member wrote: *chuckles* I wont lie and say I'm slightly biased towards the poem because of my current mood, but I really do like it. The images shift and come together nicely, and the last line falls hard, but just right.

  • A former member wrote: say I'm /not/ slightly biased*, that is

  • Aunty Depressant On Sunday, December 2, 2007, Aunty Depressant (434)By person wrote:

    I read what you posted that same day, I can see we where we were in similar mood.

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