Love was suppose to be the answer...

By LiP Stiches

As if fate was not satisfied

I felt the world

CRACK

and reform
new scars fill the holes

slowly the mist creeps back
fragrances of the burnt sun
am I lost once more?











maybe I should just pray for snow....

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© 2007 LiP Stiches
Published on Thursday, November 29, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Fantecstasy On Friday, November 30, 2007, Fantecstasy (122)By person wrote:

    heh, the ending line made me chuckle a little... New scars filling the holes... such sorrow, almost depression like. I thought this was good, well done~

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