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drops.
By Six-Out
and watching her speak
is like reaching for stars.
-and if you ever get there. the burn.
will get ya.
and it's time to make a wish.
because the sky is screaming your name.
tonight. this is yours
so write me letters on your tattered dreams.
and I'll catch every tear you cry.
oh yes. tonight.
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© 2007 Jon Rodgers
Published on Sunday, November 25, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, December 7, 2009, Blood Saga
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wrote:
This sent a shudder through my very soul. . .thank you, so very very much, my friend.
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On Wednesday, November 28, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Love this one, beautiful piece! Ciao, T/S
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On Wednesday, November 28, 2007, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
wow... this is so sweet. is it for anyone in particular? hmmm!?!? -Kinks
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A former member wrote:
it's all girls that comment here. ought to tell you something. :P
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On Monday, November 26, 2007, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
are you calling me gay?
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On Monday, November 26, 2007, blue
(1454) wrote:
hahaha
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A former member wrote:
Oh the devotion is overwhelming. Beautiful as usual. ....-Samone
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On Monday, November 26, 2007, swing_the_hammer
(49) wrote:
glad to see you posting! i don't know how you ever doubt your work... beautiful and gut-wrenching as usual.
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A former member wrote:
so succinct and yet it says so much more than mere words. ...
so quiet, nearly reverent and....
yes.
ness
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On Sunday, November 25, 2007, Mahakala
(209) wrote:
*sigh* wow... you know what would be absolutely wonderful... if you could record yourself reading it & being able to post it along with the poem...
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On Sunday, November 25, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
oh yes, oh yes
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On Sunday, November 25, 2007, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
"so write me letters on your tattered dreams." thank you for deciding to post this. If you get to close to something so amazing, it's bound to have some affect.. brilliant.
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