nan desu ka

By whisperer

sarimasu

saru or blow me away.
lead me to heaven when you die, leave the key on the table when you end today turning blue
saru
and show me the way

detriment strongest worn to die, thanks for nothing tear in eye breaking the moment leave me to rot in my itai

only in hell do these feelings survive, only in waste is anything derived
wine and water is always supplied and it hurts to drink alone
maybe someday we'll all find our peace and atone for every conviction gone awry till then tears always break the eye
saru

nan desu ka

fuck

go

just leave my memories in peace when did it ever affect you in the least why cant you go

get out of my frozen mind
this hearts no good
let me kill all yours in sweet and dearest intention kind

blow me away

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© 2007 whisperer
Published on Thursday, November 8, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Wai...Uruwashii. It drew me in, Interesting use of Japanese. overall, wonderful. --Kaosu

  • Mylissa On Thursday, November 8, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    outstanding, I can soak up plenty from the words you spun.

  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, November 8, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    loved this... empathy to the 10th degree

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