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Childish Woes
By Circe Avalon
Fallin' toys
And broken joys
And every little woe
In all the world
A plastic sword
only hits so hard
Broken wheels
and childish thrills
spin a wondrous thread
If the bugs
and lazy slugs
could only bring back the dead
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© 2007 Circe Avalon
Published on Wednesday, November 7, 2007.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Friday, March 21, 2014, Alchemist
(688)
wrote:
As an alchemist by trade and want to be necromancer by hobby I have to say slugs are a helpful friend to raise the dead, lol, cool write.
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A former member wrote:
Quick, rhyming and slightly haunting. I love it! =D
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On Monday, December 3, 2007, Distorted_Reality
(101) wrote:
woh this reminds me of something I wrote only much shorter, but with its simplicity it says so much and i can always love and respect that...good write ^_^
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On Wednesday, November 7, 2007, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
This has a "so much depends on a red wheel barrow" feel to it. There's alot to dig out of so little. Love that. Reminds me, for some reason, of that Elect the Dead video. Cool stuff.
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On Wednesday, November 7, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl
(253) wrote:
Wow, I really feel this. I've been having a lot of issues with regression and childhood and transition.. *breathes* I just need to expand my profile so I can submit them here. This is beautifully symbolic. Amazing.
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