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city.park [at sundown]
By Six-Out
.take.
.takethepowerback.
we scream like gods in the sea.
the taste of opium in the air
like soma stars and an urge
to rage.
and I know I'm not a saint
in this pit. - like a bullet in the head
I'm drifting. feet from the ground.
tonight.
I feel.
and they chant. [fuckyou]
as we jump for ourselves- and bleed
our souls. one.more.time.
feed this instance.
and
worship-
the music.
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© 2007 Jon rodgers
Published on Saturday, October 27, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "city.park [at sundown]"
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2010, jonLyndon
(113)
wrote:
"the taste of opium in the air " v. well observed & written...
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On Wednesday, January 13, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
The surge of your imagery,sweeps me off my feet in a powerful wave.Thanks for the read. Keep the oceans turning.And this reminds me of my concert experiences,and worded so well.Cheers.
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A former member wrote:
this reminds me of a book i've read... :)
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On Saturday, November 28, 2009, carlosjackal
(3012) wrote:
Kirk's comment led me here...Cracking write and tribute.
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On Wednesday, January 9, 2008, Dei
(665) wrote:
nice little tribute to the Rage.
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On Saturday, December 22, 2007, italianbella
(185) wrote:
you write with so much power in everything you write about so much strength and emotion in everything ive read of youres so far you are truely an amazing writer
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On Tuesday, December 11, 2007, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
i saw them at an outdor venue also ... they blew my brains out ... this was the most pleasant reminder .. thanks man ... great piece .. funguy
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A former member wrote:
You inspire me to want to L-E-A-R-N to write. Teach me?
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On Sunday, November 11, 2007, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
marry me?
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A former member wrote:
wow quite a different turn then expected from the title. The first stanza really caught my eye. The Smell of Opium in the Air. My body wen through a withdraw when I read those words and I smelt the faint smell. Live on...Rock On...Worship Music???? ][ ][
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On Sunday, October 28, 2007, Mari
(425) wrote:
nice.
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On Saturday, October 27, 2007, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
"We scream like gods in the sea." What I like about this is that is has power behind it, in so few words. Nice work.
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