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You Left Me On The Other Side Of Love
By liquid_emotion
Separated across oceans of emotion
And I don’t think you comprehend
Where love begins and energy ends
Within a life you never understood
Barely touching the surface outside
Endless green that held so much more
And continues to grow unattended
By your forgotten and distant eyes
So blue that I can’t look inside them
Afraid of what is hidden underneath
And not wanting to pour over the rim
That holds in a life of contemplation
And thoughts you never asked to see
Real rawness and beauty of an ocean
That separates the colors and breaks
Upon ever distant shores of love
Now swept clean by tides and time
And unspoken words that never swam
Through blues and greens of surface
Conversation and forgotten memories
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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Saturday, April 26, 2003.
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Comments on "You Left Me On The Other Side Of Love"
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A former member wrote:
All your stuff is so beautiful...
It's a sort of soft sadness, but it seems to bring forth real emotion.
Thanks~
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, Jonas
(720)
wrote:
you drip down the shower walls of my heart and soul... i relate to the structure of your words like no one else on this site... emotion... you are liquid emotion.
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On Thursday, May 1, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
*sigh*
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A former member wrote:
That was absolutely beautiful. Now I want to cry...
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A former member wrote:
Once again you demonstrate your mastery of imagery well. :)
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On Saturday, April 26, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
this is simply beautiful ... and there's at least a dictionary full of other discriptions i could of used .... awsome write poet
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On Saturday, April 26, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
The words you write seem to make the saddest things beautiful.
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On Saturday, April 26, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
I agree with Justin. Liquid, even though I hate you, you write damn good. :)
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On Saturday, April 26, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
ha!
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On Saturday, April 26, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
hmm a whole turbulent sea swept you to one side....this is thoughtful and insightful...seems like you painted a beautiful dark picture with words!
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