damsel in distress
By Circe Avalon
why do I want that knight in armor
why do I search for him in vain
when at every turn I'm let down
in every man it's the same
I sob and sway for attention
but to no avail
nothing ever seems to work
but it's just as well
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© 2007 circeavalon
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On Friday, September 14, 2007, Rebel tiGer King
(258) wrote:
nice, agrres with narc, i'm a knight but have no armor :) more of a tiger so i'm naked to show off my stripes, but yes indeed, love is found when one doth not wither the eyes of thine heart, do not cry love come hither and love shall come -symph-
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On Thursday, September 6, 2007, Narcissa
(404) wrote:
Not every knight rides in on a stead to sweep your heart away - typically these guys turn out to be jerks. You will find your true love just don't look - good luck - love the poem:)
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A former member wrote:
so many give up hope and settle for the cruel blacksmith. your knight awaits, have patience.
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On Wednesday, September 5, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
maybe its time for a new approach or a change of male types? i hope you find what you are looking for.
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A former member wrote:
Ooooh...I like the rhyme scheme. Short, sweet, and to the point...and yet, it drew me in all the same. ~*Beth*~