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Unwilling Catechist
By A_Puppet_Show
Like captivating ice boots,
you move to be the more -
slippery surface, and I fold;
the paper again and again.
Ride the mechanical guardian,
we line up the schooled eyes;
ohh no! why did I order this?
but they know so I shudder -
before the eyes I once knew.
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© 2007 The Teacher
Published on Monday, September 3, 2007.
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On Monday, October 8, 2007, Solace
(1069)
wrote:
You move to be the more (moor) maurer sorry it only works in English and i kinda ran away with it - if you want i'll tell you about the story that led me to think that...
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On Monday, October 8, 2007, Solace
(1069) wrote:
it seems to be a folding in on yourself, outwards. But i'm skipping the boots, the unity that they provide, the special pause at "I fold" then we ride the limited illimitable (guarding what?) - line up the schooled eyes like fish.
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On Monday, October 8, 2007, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Who teaches who? Who catches what? its not certain, but what is certain is that they know...teacher is student and student is teacher...I find myself catching myself in my own nets and can't help but come back to the boot...
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A former member wrote:
"...slippery surface, and I fold" Like an origami. Yes, you do write in odd boxes. Quite surreal. There is texture & 'mechanical' shapes in these variable receptacles: rectangular, square, elongated, round, oval, packaged poems. "captivating". ...
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A former member wrote:
mechanical guardian, for some odd reason, i thought mechanical bull...
but i should rethink that
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On Monday, September 3, 2007, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
It is importent that you do. A short poem can be very long with the word traps working.
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A former member wrote:
interesting...the mechanical guardian made me think of the fallen bear Mir writhing with parasites.
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On Monday, September 3, 2007, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
That is not far off. The imagery came from Monkeys brain. Mechanical swanes with dead staring eyes swimming forever in circles on the grave of gods. Yes he does scare me sometimes .. Here the Mechanical guardian is Jesus.
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On Monday, September 3, 2007, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
Btw I am a huge Dark Tower fan aswell but gues Peter told you that :)
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A former member wrote:
no, I figured it out for myself :)
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On Monday, September 3, 2007, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
I like Mab brains! ;)
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A former member wrote:
I love monkey brains!
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A former member wrote:
I like how you changed the ending around ;)
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On Monday, September 3, 2007, A_Puppet_Show
(166) wrote:
Thank you hehe Yes I allways post and edit on DP, I like it better then to edit on paper or in a text program :)
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