Violet

By Disassembly Boy

She crawls down walls
like violet...
Violently Stretched across the skin;
the perfect bruise.
And she'd tell you why she came
and what she was thinking
But she never thought of you.
Even in deepest shades of blue.
She was too busy chasing daisies
as you choked on her scent
of sweat and blood
and all the days spent trying to wash it clean.
Now she screams.
Rotten petals
and broken dreams.
You are just a weed
and her garden is overgrown.
Perfect shades of red
separating skin from bone.
So cut the stem
and see how you feel
But milk white wounds
wont ever heal.
Her drowning seeds,
So overfed..
Just another dead flower
in her bed.


*Be sure to visit my page and see my newest photomanipulation that goes with this (for a better view http://disassembly-boy.deviantart.com *


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© 2007 Disassembly Boy
Published on Wednesday, August 15, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Magdalena On Sunday, November 27, 2016, Magdalena (792)By person wrote:

    This is one of my most favourite pieces of work from you.

  • 10 Forty Three On Thursday, October 13, 2016, 10 Forty Three (649)By person wrote:

    Wow... just wow... 10/10. - 10:43

  • theotherwoman On Friday, December 20, 2013, theotherwoman (56)By person wrote:

    *speechless*...just another dead flower in her bed...wow...

  • Mylissa On Sunday, May 17, 2009, Mylissa (853)By person wrote:

    so seductive, you're missed.

  • Aunty Depressant On Wednesday, September 12, 2007, Aunty Depressant (436)By person wrote:

    Seductive, yet foreboding.

  • asphyxia On Tuesday, August 21, 2007, asphyxia (57)By person wrote:

    ......perfection...

  • Bella Butchery On Friday, August 17, 2007, Bella Butchery (734)By person wrote:

    your art is amazing

  • A former member wrote: Oh my, I think this is the best you've written, or at least my absolute favorite. So unique

  • Tania On Thursday, August 16, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    ..rotten petals and broken dreams.. love the imagery.. and the first and last lines.. amazing.

  • A former member wrote: the picture definitely adds to it, but this is incredible all on its own."milk white wounds wont ever heal." god! I cannot help but picture this

  • nur hidayah On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, nur hidayah (122)By person wrote:

    Violet... Violence. Savagely beautiful. The imagery is wild. I loved every line.

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, Mylissa (853)By person wrote:

    Okay I am staining your words to my thoughts...your pictures to my eyes, and your mind to my hands...I want to recreate such brilliance over and over...perfectly done!!

  • Reefer_rave On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, Reefer_rave (146)By person wrote:

    - you are just a weed and her garden is overgrown - Even spring fades into winter, this is beautiful.

  • Reefer_rave On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, Reefer_rave (146)By person wrote:

    every*

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