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-Tongues Twisted in Melody-
By Revisable Retina
-Tongues Twisted in Melody-
plucking strings of six
languid fingers strumming chords
three Spanish guitars, angelically sinful
-music bends boundaries-
waves slice ears in a symmetrical rhythmic manner
on thy shoulder you rest
sound arise repeatedly over tightened strings
graceful allurement played out by a violinists
-music is all but kind to a feeble heart-
engulfed in music taken aback by sound
fingers dance these keys
with a seat pulled up properly
elegance is in the poise of a pianist
-music mends fragile minds-
creating a unity between notes
breath taken from lungs
eyes tight, fingers pressing golden notes
the admiration of a saxophonist, devilishly pleasing
-music is a need, more than a want-
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© 2007 RachelDawn
Published on Tuesday, August 14, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "-Tongues Twisted in Melody-"
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On Sunday, October 5, 2008, thelostmessenger
(112)
wrote:
music is all that will ever complete me. and the title is fantastic. i wouldn't be here if it weren't for music. thats a life i care not to imagine.
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On Wednesday, August 29, 2007, Sketso
(435) wrote:
aye, music is a primal craving, and if you listen carefully, it can often be found in the strangest of places. Thanks for sharing.
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A former member wrote:
music is a small part of the rare magic this world offers.. this was striking.
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On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Makes me think of the harmony of the spheres, what music is supposed to be, harmony - this is a delicate harmony of its own, unity expressed elegantly - music should suffuse us and uplift us - and we do need that, we need it immensely
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On Tuesday, August 14, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
perfect.... my passion for music makes my heart break... and so does this... fav
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On Tuesday, August 14, 2007, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
truth done in a graceful flow and perfect in its telling....
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A former member wrote:
to twine the two together melody and harmony; music with words [poetry] you have created a sonorous tone....serene and stippled with diverse light
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