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A Monet Sky
By liquid_emotion
Streaks of white light and pink
Against the blue of your eyes
And I don’t remember your voice
Or recall whether or not I love you
I pulled away from your world
And then forgot to tell you why
Left in the emptiness I am filling
Dumping out and filling again
Nothing feels right in my thoughts
And still I cannot bring myself
To let you deep inside a secret
That won’t whisper through
Plastic letters and dim lit screens
So I slip away quietly unnoticed
And pretend you left me here
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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Wednesday, April 23, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "A Monet Sky"
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On Friday, April 25, 2003, shadowsinthelight
(146)
wrote:
All the above, S.
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On Thursday, April 24, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
brilliantly done.
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On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
a nerve ending poked .. nicely done
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On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
well, that doesn't sound soothing:)
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A former member wrote:
WOW! i love this too good write liquid
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On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, SnowQueen
(59) wrote:
I love this.
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On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
sneaky and kinda cubist... in the mind... i dunno, sometimes it's hard to describe what words do to me... these are lukewarm words, and they feel like they should be.
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On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
damn right!
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On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Very nice. Of course I love all of your work liquid. You never cease to make me smile. Or sad, whichever way the poem is written, or um....you get what I mean.
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