Through The Obvious

By liquid_emotion

Darkness
Renders me speechless
Eternally silent
Alone in my
Memories

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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Wednesday, April 23, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • cre On Thursday, April 24, 2003, cre (411)By person wrote:

    Excellent .. yer such a clever thing :P I enjoyed this one, another great job.

  • A former member wrote: This poem is nice. I've always loved to recall DREAMs and analyze them. You did so with clever art. :)

  • Jonas On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    i NEVER get those goddam accronym riddle poems. that's ok though. nice write. have you read dave's tic tac poem?

  • liquid_emotion On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    I will now.

  • Jonas On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    smoke, invisible but ever so palpable hovers above my head, swirling with all the thoughts and forgotten memories a child of twenty should or shouldn't have... stoned with the lights out.

  • A former member wrote: I think this poem is amazing! Even thought it's short, it uses powerful images to paint pictures. It's just lush :)

  • liquid_emotion On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    well, it's short for good reason... through the obvious :) thank you so very much.

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